Ultimate "Oz"

[TheManWithoutFear]

Help me out with this guys.

When: Probably somewhere in the near future (just so they can give me more characters)
Where: Ryker's Island
Who:
Killer Shrike
Gladiator
Bullseye
The Enforcers
Punisher
Rhino (Pending on if he can get the suit off)
Boomerang
Owl (though never been caught or even shown, I think it'd be cool if he was like the Adebisi/Schillinger of the group)
Anyone else?


Anybody got any ideas for this?

[René]

I woud use Bullseye, Punisher, Rhino and maybe some of The Enforcers. Trying to make an escape. But would Rhino be in Rykers? Anywhoo... that'd be pretty cool

[TheManWithoutFear]

I woud use Bullseye, Punisher, Rhino and maybe some of The Enforcers. Trying to make an escape. But would Rhino be in Rykers? Anywhoo... that'd be pretty cool

If Rhino's suit can come off than yea. Owl seems like a plausible mutant to have because his powers aren't too "threatening" is there any other mutants you can think of? I liked the Ultimate Jigsaw idea someone threw out. It'd be a great way to introduce him. Another important part would be who is in charge of the prison? Who else is working it?

How bout writer and artist?

[Friday]

Shocker, sans gauntlets. He's been pooed on enough so far, let him gain some credability in the Ultimate Universe.

[TheManWithoutFear]

Shocker, sans gauntlets. He's been pooed on enough so far, let him gain some credability in the Ultimate Universe.

Right forgot about him.

[moonmaster]

Is it wrong that when ever I look at this thread I immediately think about the inevitable "don't drop the soap" shower scene?

[TheManWithoutFear]

Is it wrong that when ever I look at this thread I immediately think about the inevitable "don't drop the soap" shower scene?

Yeah. But good point. I'm wondering if anyone sees any of this type of relationship coming out of any of these characters... ? :?

[moonmaster]

I can totally see the Rhino making some poor white collar criminal his b-i-e-i-itch.

[TheManWithoutFear]

b-i-e-i-itch.
:lol: :lol:

I don't see it happening with anyone yet. But if someone thinks about it, throw it out there.

So anyone think of any Ultimate introductions for employees? Ultimate Bishop?

[moonmaster]

Ultimate Bishop would be neat. Just get rid of the whole time travel thing.
He could be a police officer who is forced to hide his powers from his fellow officers. Then one day he is contacted by SHIELD to be the guard at the new super-duper max section of Ryker's where they plan to send all the supervillains. They want guards with powers, so they can stand toe to toe with the villains if need be. He could have the same powers as the 616 version (I like his ability to charge weapons with his own energy... I think he can do that. Right?). In the "OZ" story, it could give you a different perspective on prison life.

[TheManWithoutFear]

I'd like to see Bishop in there, I'd also like to see a female. Maybe Heather McNeil? Jessica Drew? Misty Knight?

Anyway here's a plot for one of the arcs. Let me know what you guys think about this one. It's a religious themed arc and it deals with a new inmate by the name of Johnny Blaze or Danny Ketch. Ok, so I don't have it all worked out but it'd have something to do with the mysterious "murders" of criminals and Ultimate Ghostrider would be introduced as either a worker or inmate behind it all trying to cleanse the prison of the most sinful.

[moonmaster]

I'd like to see Bishop in there, I'd also like to see a female. Maybe Heather McNeil? Jessica Drew? Misty Knight?

Anyway here's a plot for one of the arcs. Let me know what you guys think about this one. It's a religious themed arc and it deals with a new inmate by the name of Johnny Blaze or Danny Ketch. Ok, so I don't have it all worked out but it'd have something to do with the mysterious "murders" of criminals and Ultimate Ghostrider would be introduced as either a worker or inmate behind it all trying to cleanse the prison of the most sinful.

A mysterious loner named Johnny Blaze is found at the scene of a horrific murder, and is consequently tied to a series of graphic serial killing in the area. He is convicted and sent to Ryker's. Soon, someone or something begins killing inmates. Bishop begins investigating. Johnny does not know that there is something inside of him that hungers for vengeance....

Sorry MWoF for sort of taking your idea, but I thought I could flesh it out a little bit. And as for Bishop's partner, I know that he works with Sage in the 616 universe.

[TheManWithoutFear]

A mysterious loner named Johnny Blaze is found at the scene of a horrific murder, and is consequently tied to a series of graphic serial killing in the area. He is convicted and sent to Ryker's. Soon, someone or something begins killing inmates. Bishop begins investigating. Johnny does not know that there is something inside of him that hungers for vengeance....

Sorry MWoF for sort of taking your idea, but I thought I could flesh it out a little bit. And as for Bishop's partner, I know that he works with Sage in the 616 universe.

Not a problem that's what the forum's for. I like what you did anyway.

[compound]

I'd like to see Bishop in there, I'd also like to see a female.Monica Rambeau (Captain Marvel II/Photon) was originally a cop. She would make an interesting fit as Bishop's partner, with a bit of reinvention.

[TheManWithoutFear]

Monica Rambeau (Captain Marvel II/Photon) was originally a cop. She would make an interesting fit as Bishop's partner, with a bit of reinvention.

Sounds good but Bishop wouldn't have a "partner" he'd just be a guard.

[Caduceus]

Sounds good but Bishop wouldn't have a "partner" he'd just be a guard.
The only problem is that its been stated that "this Bishop character" is a teenager with a criminal record. There are a number of other options for the guards though.

[ProjectX2]

I may be being stupid or something... But what does this have to do with the "OZ" serum? Can someone please explain?

[Caduceus]

I may be being stupid or something... But what does this have to do with the "OZ" serum? Can someone please explain?
It doesn't. I'm assuming it has to do with the great tv show called "Oz" set in Oswald Prison. Wasn't big in the southern hemisphere but I caught it one night and kept watching. Great show.

[TheManWithoutFear]

The only problem is that its been stated that "this Bishop character" is a teenager with a criminal record. There are a number of other options for the guards though.

True.


and sorry for the confusion Project.

[ProjectX2]

That's okay. Since it was Ultimate OZ I thoguht we were talking about the OZ serum. Obviousley, that's another programme that hasn't aired on NZ tv yet.

[TheManWithoutFear]

That's okay. Since it was Ultimate OZ I thoguht we were talking about the OZ serum. Obviousley, that's another programme that hasn't aired on NZ tv yet.

Ic... that sucks it was a good show.

Anyone else with thoughts or how they feel about the idea?

[TheManWithoutFear]

I forgot about this... If Sinister wasn't part of the Trisk. Then maybe he could be a character too. Always preaching about the end of the world.

[Caduceus]

I forgot about this... If Sinister wasn't part of the Trisk. Then maybe he could be a character too. Always preaching about the end of the world.
Sort of like the guy in the wheelchair was doing during his narrative spots on Oz half the time? Interesting concept. Veeeeery interesting.

[TheManWithoutFear]

Sort of like the guy in the wheelchair was doing during his narrative spots on Oz half the time? Interesting concept. Veeeeery interesting.

Hill, loved that guy.

But I don't remember him preaching about the end of the world. I mean Sinister would be a crazy sob. Hill was pretty cool.

[Caduceus]

Hill, loved that guy.

But I don't remember him preaching about the end of the world. I mean Sinister would be a crazy sob. Hill was pretty cool.
He was pretty cool. But some of the ways he was passing across his messages were a bit screwed up. I do remember at least one episode about the end of the world.

[The Overlord]

I say have some Ultimate DD villains like Jigsaw, Bushwacker, Bullseye, possiblely Purple Man. Owl is in the prison, running things on the inside. Punisher should also be there trying to clip other convicts. Make Gladiator the "hero", he's getting treatment and help from his parole officer Betsy and his lawyer Matt Murdock to help him deal with his "Roman Fantasy" delusions, but its hard staying sane while being surround of psychopaths

[TheManWithoutFear]

I say have some Ultimate DD villains like Jigsaw, Bushwacker, Bullseye, possiblely Purple Man. Owl is in the prison, running things on the inside. Punisher should also be there trying to clip other convicts. Make Gladiator the "hero", he's getting treatment and help from his parole officer Betsy and his lawyer Matt Murdock to help him deal with his "Roman Fantasy" delusions, but its hard staying sane while being surround of psychopaths

It's all deadly. Glad you bumped this up Overlord. I tried to keep only those "less super-powered" villains so I dunno how Purple Man would be toned down. Then again, it all depends on how these characters got in there. Love the Gladiator idea.

[The Overlord]

It's all deadly. Glad you bumped this up Overlord. I tried to keep only those "less super-powered" villains so I dunno how Purple Man would be toned down. Then again, it all depends on how these characters got in there. Love the Gladiator idea.

That's why I said "maybe" Purple Man. An OZ type title needs a crazy rapist villain and Purple man fits that bill. He would wear a collar while in prison that would surpress his powers.

It would also be cool if Melvin Potter was sharing a cell with Bushwacker, so Potter can see how far gone another human being can go and try harder to get help.

[The Overlord]

You know who would also be a good character to use in "Ultimate OZ" introduce Ultimate Tombstone. Just use him the way he was in his early appearances in 616 MU, before he got super powers. Lonnie Lincoln is a big, mean, ruthless, albino hitman who likes to beat his targets to death. He could be Owl's enforcer at Riker's.

[TheManWithoutFear]

You know who would also be a good character to use in "Ultimate OZ" introduce Ultimate Tombstone. Just use him the way he was in his early appearances in 616 MU, before he got super powers. Lonnie Lincoln is a big, mean, ruthless, albino hitman who likes to beat his targets to death. He could be Owl's enforcer at Riker's.
I'm unfamiliar with any details of tombstone. I know he was an albino but never even knew he had powers. Good thought on him though.

[The Overlord]

I'm unfamiliar with any details of tombstone. I know he was an albino but never even knew he had powers. Good thought on him though.

Click here for some info on Tombstone:
http://www.geocities.com/bulmasan/tombstone/tombstone.html

At first he was just a psycho hitman, then was exposed to some chemicals and became super strong and super durable.

The uutimate Tombstone would just be 616 Tombstone before he got the powers.

In the 616 universe Tombstone had Joe Roberstson from the Daily Bugle arrested and imprisoned. Roberstson was being protected by a con named "The Brute" in prison, until Tombstone beat the Brute death. It be cool in Ultimate OZ if Potter made friends with the Brute, but the Brute crossed the Owl and had Tombstone beat him to death.

Here is an orginal character I created for the ultimate OZ series, a corrupt prison guard named John Birch. Birch is in league with the Owl and helps him smuggle drugs in into the prison. owl then has his accountant wire Birch money into his bank account.

[TheManWithoutFear]

Here is an orginal character I created for the ultimate OZ series, a corrupt prison guard named Jason Birch. Birch is in league with the Owl and helps him smuggle drugs in into the prison. owl then has his accountant wire Birch money into his bank account.

Yes, we definitely need corrupt cops. Good call.

[The Overlord]

Yes, we definitely need corrupt cops. Good call.

Thanks.

Let me ask you, would "Ultimate OZ" be a MK or MAX rated title?

[Ice]

Let me ask you, would "Ultimate OZ" be a MK or MAX rated title?
MAX all the way!

(Though I wasnt the one being asked. :))

[thee great one]

I think it should be Max. But it could work at Knights.

[TheManWithoutFear]

Thanks.

Let me ask you, would "Ultimate OZ" be a MK or MAX rated title?

Max. I mean I wouldn't even want to begin sugarcoating it. We're not talkin' about bad guys with good intentions, we're not talkin' about even guys with super-powers (this isn't the Trisk). These characters are desperate men with serious mental health issues and would do anything for survival.

[The Overlord]

Max. I mean I wouldn't even want to begin sugarcoating it. We're not talkin' about bad guys with good intentions, we're not talkin' about even guys with super-powers (this isn't the Trisk). These characters are desperate men with serious mental health issues and would do anything for survival.

Good call. Anyway I have an idea for a story arc called "Framed", in which tombstone before being busted by Spidey during an attempted hit, he puts into action a scheme that frames his old "pal" Joseph Roberstson for murder. While DD and spidey race to clear Robertson's name, Robertson befriends Gladiator and tries to survive.

[Patriot Mk2]

Purple Man could just be in for murder, and most people just think he's a freak/mutant?Over the series he gradually turns the prison into his personal empire, except its very subtly done and viewers aren't really sure what he's up to. Towards the end of the first season he overthrows the owl, but he doesn't kill him. Killgrave's too arrogant to think that the Owl could be any threat to him because of his powers, so Purple ties him to the railings on the top floor of the prison as an example to anyone who could stand up to him.

Directly after this, Killgrave enlarges his control over the prison and instead of just his faction he tries to control everyone.Killgrave's not as powerful as he thinks, and a few people start to slip away......like Tombstone, Gladiator, Robertson, Punisher, and Sinister.A few cops as well.Tombstone's still(apparently) loyal to the Owl,and Killgrave thinks he controls him.Tombstone works his way up to Purple's top level and is one of his guards.Killgrave's control is getting weaker and weaker,yet he doesn't realize.Inmates are training every day, Purple's planning to pull off a jailbreak and try to use his new army to wrestle a piece of the underworld once they get out.

About a weak after he was overthrown the Owl's nearly dead from starvation and the beatings he got from Killgrave's men. Somehow he gets freed by Tombstone, so Purple(along with everyone else) wakes up one morning and suddenly Purple's symbol of power has gone walkies.Purple's goin' psycho, and everyone else thinks he killed him.Owl's followers start to come around, and they're not happy.Tombstone sends them all a message saying to ready at lunchtime cuz Killgrave's gonna make a speech,and when he does they're gonna riot.Killgrave's confidence is shot to **** as he thought he could control everyone, but clearly someone got past him.And if one person can,so can two?Or three?Lunchtime arrives and There's been a segment removed from the upper level, for Purple to make a speech from.Killgrave is walking towards it & every inmate is gathered below.Sinister and some other enforcer are flanking Killgrave.Suddenly, a gunshot rings out, and the Owl is thrown from the top level, dead from a shot to the head, right before Purple arrives at the edge.Crowd are going crazy,Purple doesn't know what the **** to do.Suddenly someone in the crowd shouts out "Purple murdered the Owl!Wring his neck!" Crowd turns into one giant brawl, some people running for cover, some tryin to get to the higher levels to either defend or attack Purple.Last shot of the episode is Tombstone with a gun in his hand, smiling.

Finale:The riots have been on for two hours.Tombstones guys have blocked all the doors to outside so Purple can't get out, and are operating like a guerilla force.Purple's hiding on the top floor, crying like a baby.His guys are getting massacred cuz they're still under his control and he can't do **** right now.One of his lieutenants,preferably Sinister, walks into his office and tells him to get it together if he wants to get out alive.Killgrave whines that he can't, he's not strong enough, blah blah blah.The guy is a complete mess."Lieutenant" tells him he can still win,but only if he stops acting like some little ***** being raped in the showers.He drops a syringe on the table and walks out.Its got MGH in it.Rets of the episode is all-out war between Purple and Tombstone, with Castle basically butchering anyone who comes his way, Gladiator and Robertson hiding until its over, Sinister making a run for it as soon as Purple's forces make an opening, and the inevitable "every single grudge that was ever mentioned being settled" stuff.Purple's crazy powerful now, and he ends up winning.He's got Tombstone prisoner, and he's making him do some pretty gruesome ****(would say what,but all-ages site and such :wink: ).Police load the prison with sleeping gas and burst in.Tombstone's built like a tank as opposed to the fairly physically weak Purple.We see SWAT teams breaking down the barricades and storming in, while Tombstone guts Purple like a fish.

End of Season One
:lol: just started writing and kinda lost control.......any thoughts?Think of each paragraph as an "episode."

[TheManWithoutFear]

Good call. Anyway I have an idea for a story arc called "Framed", in which tombstone before being busted by Spidey during an attempted hit, he puts into action a scheme that frames his old "pal" Joseph Roberstson for murder. While DD and spidey race to clear Robertson's name, Robertson befriends Gladiator and tries to survive.

Love the storyline. Love the DD/SM team up.


Purple Man could just be in for murder, and most people just think he's a freak/mutant?Over the series he gradually turns the prison into his personal empire, except its very subtly done and viewers aren't really sure what he's up to. Towards the end of the first season he overthrows the owl, but he doesn't kill him. Killgrave's too arrogant to think that the Owl could be any threat to him because of his powers, so Purple ties him to the railings on the top floor of the prison as an example to anyone who could stand up to him.

Directly after this, Killgrave enlarges his control over the prison and instead of just his faction he tries to control everyone.Killgrave's not as powerful as he thinks, and a few people start to slip away......like Tombstone, Gladiator, Robertson, Punisher, and Sinister.A few cops as well.Tombstone's still(apparently) loyal to the Owl,and Killgrave thinks he controls him.Tombstone works his way up to Purple's top level and is one of his guards.Killgrave's control is getting weaker and weaker,yet he doesn't realize.Inmates are training every day, Purple's planning to pull off a jailbreak and try to use his new army to wrestle a piece of the underworld once they get out.

About a weak after he was overthrown the Owl's nearly dead from starvation and the beatings he got from Killgrave's men. Somehow he gets freed by Tombstone, so Purple(along with everyone else) wakes up one morning and suddenly Purple's symbol of power has gone walkies.Purple's goin' psycho, and everyone else thinks he killed him.Owl's followers start to come around, and they're not happy.Tombstone sends them all a message saying to ready at lunchtime cuz Killgrave's gonna make a speech,and when he does they're gonna riot.Killgrave's confidence is shot to **** as he thought he could control everyone, but clearly someone got past him.And if one person can,so can two?Or three?Lunchtime arrives and There's been a segment removed from the upper level, for Purple to make a speech from.Killgrave is walking towards it & every inmate is gathered below.Sinister and some other enforcer are flanking Killgrave.Suddenly, a gunshot rings out, and the Owl is thrown from the top level, dead from a shot to the head, right before Purple arrives at the edge.Crowd are going crazy,Purple doesn't know what the **** to do.Suddenly someone in the crowd shouts out "Purple murdered the Owl!Wring his neck!" Crowd turns into one giant brawl, some people running for cover, some tryin to get to the higher levels to either defend or attack Purple.Last shot of the episode is Tombstone with a gun in his hand, smiling.

Finale:The riots have been on for two hours.Tombstones guys have blocked all the doors to outside so Purple can't get out, and are operating like a guerilla force.Purple's hiding on the top floor, crying like a baby.His guys are getting massacred cuz they're still under his control and he can't do **** right now.One of his lieutenants,preferably Sinister, walks into his office and tells him to get it together if he wants to get out alive.Killgrave whines that he can't, he's not strong enough, blah blah blah.The guy is a complete mess."Lieutenant" tells him he can still win,but only if he stops acting like some little ***** being raped in the showers.He drops a syringe on the table and walks out.Its got MGH in it.Rets of the episode is all-out war between Purple and Tombstone, with Castle basically butchering anyone who comes his way, Gladiator and Robertson hiding until its over, Sinister making a run for it as soon as Purple's forces make an opening, and the inevitable "every single grudge that was ever mentioned being settled" stuff.Purple's crazy powerful now, and he ends up winning.He's got Tombstone prisoner, and he's making him do some pretty gruesome ****(would say what,but all-ages site and such ).Police load the prison with sleeping gas and burst in.Tombstone's built like a tank as opposed to the fairly physically weak Purple.We see SWAT teams breaking down the barricades and storming in, while Tombstone guts Purple like a fish.

End of Season One
just started writing and kinda lost control.......any thoughts?Think of each paragraph as an "episode." :shock: Did you write for Oz? Awesome.

[thee great one]

Purple Man could just be in for murder, and most people just think he's a freak/mutant?Over the series he gradually turns the prison into his personal empire, except its very subtly done and viewers aren't really sure what he's up to. Towards the end of the first season he overthrows the owl, but he doesn't kill him. Killgrave's too arrogant to think that the Owl could be any threat to him because of his powers, so Purple ties him to the railings on the top floor of the prison as an example to anyone who could stand up to him.

Directly after this, Killgrave enlarges his control over the prison and instead of just his faction he tries to control everyone.Killgrave's not as powerful as he thinks, and a few people start to slip away......like Tombstone, Gladiator, Robertson, Punisher, and Sinister.A few cops as well.Tombstone's still(apparently) loyal to the Owl,and Killgrave thinks he controls him.Tombstone works his way up to Purple's top level and is one of his guards.Killgrave's control is getting weaker and weaker,yet he doesn't realize.Inmates are training every day, Purple's planning to pull off a jailbreak and try to use his new army to wrestle a piece of the underworld once they get out.

About a weak after he was overthrown the Owl's nearly dead from starvation and the beatings he got from Killgrave's men. Somehow he gets freed by Tombstone, so Purple(along with everyone else) wakes up one morning and suddenly Purple's symbol of power has gone walkies.Purple's goin' psycho, and everyone else thinks he killed him.Owl's followers start to come around, and they're not happy.Tombstone sends them all a message saying to ready at lunchtime cuz Killgrave's gonna make a speech,and when he does they're gonna riot.Killgrave's confidence is shot to **** as he thought he could control everyone, but clearly someone got past him.And if one person can,so can two?Or three?Lunchtime arrives and There's been a segment removed from the upper level, for Purple to make a speech from.Killgrave is walking towards it & every inmate is gathered below.Sinister and some other enforcer are flanking Killgrave.Suddenly, a gunshot rings out, and the Owl is thrown from the top level, dead from a shot to the head, right before Purple arrives at the edge.Crowd are going crazy,Purple doesn't know what the **** to do.Suddenly someone in the crowd shouts out "Purple murdered the Owl!Wring his neck!" Crowd turns into one giant brawl, some people running for cover, some tryin to get to the higher levels to either defend or attack Purple.Last shot of the episode is Tombstone with a gun in his hand, smiling.

Finale:The riots have been on for two hours.Tombstones guys have blocked all the doors to outside so Purple can't get out, and are operating like a guerilla force.Purple's hiding on the top floor, crying like a baby.His guys are getting massacred cuz they're still under his control and he can't do **** right now.One of his lieutenants,preferably Sinister, walks into his office and tells him to get it together if he wants to get out alive.Killgrave whines that he can't, he's not strong enough, blah blah blah.The guy is a complete mess."Lieutenant" tells him he can still win,but only if he stops acting like some little ***** being raped in the showers.He drops a syringe on the table and walks out.Its got MGH in it.Rets of the episode is all-out war between Purple and Tombstone, with Castle basically butchering anyone who comes his way, Gladiator and Robertson hiding until its over, Sinister making a run for it as soon as Purple's forces make an opening, and the inevitable "every single grudge that was ever mentioned being settled" stuff.Purple's crazy powerful now, and he ends up winning.He's got Tombstone prisoner, and he's making him do some pretty gruesome ****(would say what,but all-ages site and such :wink: ).Police load the prison with sleeping gas and burst in.Tombstone's built like a tank as opposed to the fairly physically weak Purple.We see SWAT teams breaking down the barricades and storming in, while Tombstone guts Purple like a fish.

End of Season One
:lol: just started writing and kinda lost control.......any thoughts?Think of each paragraph as an "episode."


*Sigh* if only this would really happen.

[The Overlord]

You know this series would be the perfect place for Punisher to finish off Jigsaw. Jigsaw in prison gets a crew and pursues his only real goal in life, killing Frank Castle. Through out the first couple of issues Jigsaw and his crew are trying to take the Punisher, but it always ends with Jigsaw's mooks being killed in nasty ways.

During the riot that Johnny Bravo described so well, Frank is taking pot shots at the rioting factions on the prison when Jigsaw's crew come up from the stair well. Punisher starts slaugthering the crew when Jigsaw sneaks up and tosses a stun grenade at Frank. Jigsaw knocks the AK-47 out of Frank's hands and is about to shoot Frank in the head with his own hand gun, when Punisher bites Jigsaw's hand and forces him drop the gun.

Punisher and Jigsaw both pull out knifes and get into a brutal knife fight. Jigsaw is screaming at Frank like a psycho, while Frank maintains a cool head. Frank eventually stabs Jigsaw in the heart and kicks him off the roof. Frank then picks up the AK-47 and starts shooting at the convicts again.

[The Overlord]

Purple Man could just be in for murder, and most people just think he's a freak/mutant?Over the series he gradually turns the prison into his personal empire, except its very subtly done and viewers aren't really sure what he's up to. Towards the end of the first season he overthrows the owl, but he doesn't kill him. Killgrave's too arrogant to think that the Owl could be any threat to him because of his powers, so Purple ties him to the railings on the top floor of the prison as an example to anyone who could stand up to him.

Directly after this, Killgrave enlarges his control over the prison and instead of just his faction he tries to control everyone.Killgrave's not as powerful as he thinks, and a few people start to slip away......like Tombstone, Gladiator, Robertson, Punisher, and Sinister.A few cops as well.Tombstone's still(apparently) loyal to the Owl,and Killgrave thinks he controls him.Tombstone works his way up to Purple's top level and is one of his guards.Killgrave's control is getting weaker and weaker,yet he doesn't realize.Inmates are training every day, Purple's planning to pull off a jailbreak and try to use his new army to wrestle a piece of the underworld once they get out.

About a weak after he was overthrown the Owl's nearly dead from starvation and the beatings he got from Killgrave's men. Somehow he gets freed by Tombstone, so Purple(along with everyone else) wakes up one morning and suddenly Purple's symbol of power has gone walkies.Purple's goin' psycho, and everyone else thinks he killed him.Owl's followers start to come around, and they're not happy.Tombstone sends them all a message saying to ready at lunchtime cuz Killgrave's gonna make a speech,and when he does they're gonna riot.Killgrave's confidence is shot to **** as he thought he could control everyone, but clearly someone got past him.And if one person can,so can two?Or three?Lunchtime arrives and There's been a segment removed from the upper level, for Purple to make a speech from.Killgrave is walking towards it & every inmate is gathered below.Sinister and some other enforcer are flanking Killgrave.Suddenly, a gunshot rings out, and the Owl is thrown from the top level, dead from a shot to the head, right before Purple arrives at the edge.Crowd are going crazy,Purple doesn't know what the **** to do.Suddenly someone in the crowd shouts out "Purple murdered the Owl!Wring his neck!" Crowd turns into one giant brawl, some people running for cover, some tryin to get to the higher levels to either defend or attack Purple.Last shot of the episode is Tombstone with a gun in his hand, smiling.

Finale:The riots have been on for two hours.Tombstones guys have blocked all the doors to outside so Purple can't get out, and are operating like a guerilla force.Purple's hiding on the top floor, crying like a baby.His guys are getting massacred cuz they're still under his control and he can't do **** right now.One of his lieutenants,preferably Sinister, walks into his office and tells him to get it together if he wants to get out alive.Killgrave whines that he can't, he's not strong enough, blah blah blah.The guy is a complete mess."Lieutenant" tells him he can still win,but only if he stops acting like some little ***** being raped in the showers.He drops a syringe on the table and walks out.Its got MGH in it.Rets of the episode is all-out war between Purple and Tombstone, with Castle basically butchering anyone who comes his way, Gladiator and Robertson hiding until its over, Sinister making a run for it as soon as Purple's forces make an opening, and the inevitable "every single grudge that was ever mentioned being settled" stuff.Purple's crazy powerful now, and he ends up winning.He's got Tombstone prisoner, and he's making him do some pretty gruesome ****(would say what,but all-ages site and such :wink: ).Police load the prison with sleeping gas and burst in.Tombstone's built like a tank as opposed to the fairly physically weak Purple.We see SWAT teams breaking down the barricades and storming in, while Tombstone guts Purple like a fish.

End of Season One
:lol: just started writing and kinda lost control.......any thoughts?Think of each paragraph as an "episode."

That's awesome man.

[TheManWithoutFear]

Good add Overlord. I like the subplotting.

[The Overlord]

I think at this point, after this point we can also assign "roles" to the various characters:

Owl: The guy who really runs the prison. Smuggles in drugs and controls the prison that way. Is a snob, thinks he is more intelligent than everyone else. The prisoner that makes the most use out of the prison library.

Tombstone: Owl's enforcer. Big mean, albino guy, likes to beat people to death. Built like a Tank. Everyone thinks he is stupid, but he has a lot of street smarts and his own agenda.

Purple Man: the guy who plans on getting control of the prison, is also a psycho rapist.

Bullseye: Loner psycho. Will kill anyone who looks at him cross eyed.

Bushwacker: The religious guy, is pretty silent a lot of the time, though prone to fits of rage when he feels his beliefs are threatened.

Punisher: Vigilant who will try to kill as many as the other prisoners as he can.

Jigsaw: Obessive psycho who will take any means to kill Punsher.

Gladiator: Gentle giant, working hard to defeat his inner demons and become an honest citizen.

Joe Robertson: framed and unjustly imprisoned. Will others on the outside are trying to clear his name, he has to survive Rikers.

[TheManWithoutFear]

Remember the original idea was to have Sinister play the prophetic guy. He's powerless now so it would've worked out perfectly. I know he may get out in this upcoming arc but we'll see what goes down.

This would make an interesting appearance for Ultimate Cloak as well. Only the idea I have in mind is similar to the Ultimate Ghost Rider one I had.

[The Overlord]

Remember the original idea was to have Sinister play the prophetic guy. He's powerless now so it would've worked out perfectly. I know he may get out in this upcoming arc but we'll see what goes down.

This would make an interesting appearance for Ultimate Cloak as well. Only the idea I have in mind is similar to the Ultimate Ghost Rider one I had.

When did Sinister lose his powers? Besides I am sure Sinister is serving time at the Trisk at the end of Tempest arc, not Rikers.

[ProjectX2]

When did Sinister lose his powers? Besides I am sure Sinister is serving time at the Trisk at the end of Tempest arc, not Rikers.

Agreed.

BTW, nice ideas you guys are throwing around.

[TheManWithoutFear]

When did Sinister lose his powers? Besides I am sure Sinister is serving time at the Trisk at the end of Tempest arc, not Rikers.
I'm sure he is too. But he's got nothing right now because Apocolypse is where his powers come from. I think people agree with that because I remember them saying that he would further his powers through his experiments because he had lost them without Apoc's aid. The thought I had intended was he would be moved to Riker's shortly after the Trisk found him without powers.

[The Overlord]

I'm sure he is too. But he's got nothing right now because Apocolypse is where his powers come from. I think people agree with that because I remember them saying that he would further his powers through his experiments because he had lost them without Apoc's aid. The thought I had intended was he would be moved to Riker's shortly after the Trisk found him without powers.

We are not even sure that Apoc really exists or if he is only an insane delusions of Sinister. Besides I have seen no evidence that he has truly lost his powers.

[The Overlord]

I also think Turk should show up now and again in Rikers, he could play the role of loavable loser.

[TheManWithoutFear]

I also think Turk should show up now and again in Rikers, he could play the role of loavable loser.

Who always manages to escape with his crazy antics but ends up getting brought right back in.