My Boom-Boom's mostly gay
Like Project said, you can see the panels, just really have no idea on the story yet, not enough here. But I think you may make the panels themselves to wordy, and the word balloons would take over the panel and cover the art.
hm.... Really? I was worried about that and have been trying to keep it pared down a little bit. I've been using Starman and Doom Patrol, which are pretty text heavy, as a reference for how much I can fit into a panel, and it seemed like I was doing alright.
2.2 and 2.5 are the two panels I'd worry about. Maybe I could cut down the number of panels on page two or find a different way to map it. But I need a little bit of bubble space to introduce the personalities of these guys.