darkspider
Formerly known as 'darkspider16'
Darkened Skies
Ch. 1.1
The sun rose late that day. Omun, the oldest of the men in the village, said it was a sign, an omen of destruction sent by the gods. The villagers paid no heed to his words; he had predicted many disasters in the past, and only rarely had they proven true. He had once been a great seer, a person who could predict certain events, in his lifetime. Now, as the years caught up with him, he would prophesize more and more frequently, and his predictions were always wrong. The villagers stopped listening to his words when he prophesized a great famine hitting the village. The villagers stocked up on food and slaughtered all of their sheep for two weeks. For a month they waited for the dreaded famine. When it didn't come, the villagers grew angry. The townspeople had then discovered that swarms of locusts had ruined all the stored grain and the meat had began to rot. The villagers anger had reached the breaking point. It was only by the intervention of the chief that Omun lived, though he was now shunned by all.
This time, the villagers went about, minding their own business. The old prophet stood in the dust-trodden path, crying out to anyone who'd listen. "Hear me, people! The great Ragn'az has sent us this sign. We must leave this forsaken land! For, if we don't, we shall be crushed by the on-coming danger!" Pounding up the road upon his steed cam Kael, the chieftain's son. He gave the old soothsayer a loathing look. "You despicable old fool," he sneered. "Why don't you take your lousy omens, and leave this village!" Many of the villagers began to surround the two. "We," he gestured to everyone around him, "are fine without your constant omens of death. The only destruction that would come to this village is you!" He pointed an accusing finger at the helpless man. The circle of people, now becoming a mob, began to close in on the prophet. Some even pulled out their swords. Kael cried out to the villagers. "I say the old fool should be driven out now!" With that, the mass of villagers began to seize Omun.
Suddenly, a flash of movement shot through the crowd. Directly between Omun and Kael stood an arrow transfixed into the ground. Both looked up. At the rear of the mob, stood Thurgim, the chief of the village. In one hand was a massive wooden bow, while his other carried three more shafts. Behind him was a score of warriors at the ready. "Kael," he roared. "What are you doing here?" Kael glanced at the arrow, then replied, "This old fool has caused enough trouble. Remember the famine?" This caused Omun to flinch. "I was doing my duty," finished Kael. His father held the young man's rebellious gaze and asked, "Oh? And what duty would that be?" "The duty of our warriors. This man has been preaching lies," said Kael. Thurgim strode closely to his son and spoke softly. "You will not force any of our village to leave. Remember Kael, you are not the chieftain yet."
Father and son glared at each other. Finally, Kael stalked off. "Not for long, father. Not for long." Thurgim looked down at Omun. "It seems, my old friend, that you are not wanted. I give you till tonight to gather your belongings. Omun," he said, seeing the elder's devastated expression. "I am doing this for your safety. My son," he shook his head. "Kael has a thirst for blood these days. I fear he will cause trouble, even kill. And there is no one he would wish to kill than you." He looked up into the sky. It was beginning to darken, which was very unusual, for, it was barely midday and the rainy season has already passed. "I give you till tonight. My men will escort you out of the village." Omun, desperate, lunged forward and grabbed Thurgim. "You must listen! There is great danger coming towards our village! We must leave! We must…" "NO!" said Thurgim loudly. "Even I tire of your ceaseless omens! Prepare for your departure. And with that, the chieftain left, leaving Omun standing in the dust.
That night, Omun heard pounding on his door. He moved about in the darkness of his home with ease. The building was really a little hovel, on the edge of town. He rarely kept a fire going, for wood was hard to come by in this desolate, hilly area, and Omun had grown accustomed t the cold. His home had had two rooms, a small bedroom with his cot (no one in the village slept on beds), and a slightly larger room, which contained a fire pit, a tub for washing, and a cupboard barely full with bowls and other dishes. Dust and dirt covered the floor and walls, and intricate spider webs hung in the room's corners. Omun opened his wooden door to find two of Thurgim's men waiting with three horses, nervously neighing behind him. One of them spoke up, the agitation apparent in his voice. "Make haste! We must go quickly! Kael has roused the blood of the villagers! They started a great blaze in the center of town, and are prepared to rush up here and set fire to your home, with you inside!"
Omun glanced down the path and saw the flames reaching up to the starry sky. Smoke rose into the air and covered the whole village within an ashy, grey blanket. Many dark, blurry shapes were surrounding the blaze. Omun heard a fever-pitched chant rising from the square. He ran back into the shack and gathered his few, meager things. "Come now," said the other man. "We have brought a horse for you. We shall ride to the next town, where you shall stay." They jumped onto their steeds and rode up the hill, with Omun following. At the crest of the second hill, Omun looked back upon the town, which he had once called home. With a start he saw his little shack burn down, and heard the frightening cries of rage as the villagers discovered he wasn't within the burning wreckage. He turned away and urged his horse faster , trying to get as far away from the villager's burning desire to see him dead.
Ch. 1.1
The sun rose late that day. Omun, the oldest of the men in the village, said it was a sign, an omen of destruction sent by the gods. The villagers paid no heed to his words; he had predicted many disasters in the past, and only rarely had they proven true. He had once been a great seer, a person who could predict certain events, in his lifetime. Now, as the years caught up with him, he would prophesize more and more frequently, and his predictions were always wrong. The villagers stopped listening to his words when he prophesized a great famine hitting the village. The villagers stocked up on food and slaughtered all of their sheep for two weeks. For a month they waited for the dreaded famine. When it didn't come, the villagers grew angry. The townspeople had then discovered that swarms of locusts had ruined all the stored grain and the meat had began to rot. The villagers anger had reached the breaking point. It was only by the intervention of the chief that Omun lived, though he was now shunned by all.
This time, the villagers went about, minding their own business. The old prophet stood in the dust-trodden path, crying out to anyone who'd listen. "Hear me, people! The great Ragn'az has sent us this sign. We must leave this forsaken land! For, if we don't, we shall be crushed by the on-coming danger!" Pounding up the road upon his steed cam Kael, the chieftain's son. He gave the old soothsayer a loathing look. "You despicable old fool," he sneered. "Why don't you take your lousy omens, and leave this village!" Many of the villagers began to surround the two. "We," he gestured to everyone around him, "are fine without your constant omens of death. The only destruction that would come to this village is you!" He pointed an accusing finger at the helpless man. The circle of people, now becoming a mob, began to close in on the prophet. Some even pulled out their swords. Kael cried out to the villagers. "I say the old fool should be driven out now!" With that, the mass of villagers began to seize Omun.
Suddenly, a flash of movement shot through the crowd. Directly between Omun and Kael stood an arrow transfixed into the ground. Both looked up. At the rear of the mob, stood Thurgim, the chief of the village. In one hand was a massive wooden bow, while his other carried three more shafts. Behind him was a score of warriors at the ready. "Kael," he roared. "What are you doing here?" Kael glanced at the arrow, then replied, "This old fool has caused enough trouble. Remember the famine?" This caused Omun to flinch. "I was doing my duty," finished Kael. His father held the young man's rebellious gaze and asked, "Oh? And what duty would that be?" "The duty of our warriors. This man has been preaching lies," said Kael. Thurgim strode closely to his son and spoke softly. "You will not force any of our village to leave. Remember Kael, you are not the chieftain yet."
Father and son glared at each other. Finally, Kael stalked off. "Not for long, father. Not for long." Thurgim looked down at Omun. "It seems, my old friend, that you are not wanted. I give you till tonight to gather your belongings. Omun," he said, seeing the elder's devastated expression. "I am doing this for your safety. My son," he shook his head. "Kael has a thirst for blood these days. I fear he will cause trouble, even kill. And there is no one he would wish to kill than you." He looked up into the sky. It was beginning to darken, which was very unusual, for, it was barely midday and the rainy season has already passed. "I give you till tonight. My men will escort you out of the village." Omun, desperate, lunged forward and grabbed Thurgim. "You must listen! There is great danger coming towards our village! We must leave! We must…" "NO!" said Thurgim loudly. "Even I tire of your ceaseless omens! Prepare for your departure. And with that, the chieftain left, leaving Omun standing in the dust.
That night, Omun heard pounding on his door. He moved about in the darkness of his home with ease. The building was really a little hovel, on the edge of town. He rarely kept a fire going, for wood was hard to come by in this desolate, hilly area, and Omun had grown accustomed t the cold. His home had had two rooms, a small bedroom with his cot (no one in the village slept on beds), and a slightly larger room, which contained a fire pit, a tub for washing, and a cupboard barely full with bowls and other dishes. Dust and dirt covered the floor and walls, and intricate spider webs hung in the room's corners. Omun opened his wooden door to find two of Thurgim's men waiting with three horses, nervously neighing behind him. One of them spoke up, the agitation apparent in his voice. "Make haste! We must go quickly! Kael has roused the blood of the villagers! They started a great blaze in the center of town, and are prepared to rush up here and set fire to your home, with you inside!"
Omun glanced down the path and saw the flames reaching up to the starry sky. Smoke rose into the air and covered the whole village within an ashy, grey blanket. Many dark, blurry shapes were surrounding the blaze. Omun heard a fever-pitched chant rising from the square. He ran back into the shack and gathered his few, meager things. "Come now," said the other man. "We have brought a horse for you. We shall ride to the next town, where you shall stay." They jumped onto their steeds and rode up the hill, with Omun following. At the crest of the second hill, Omun looked back upon the town, which he had once called home. With a start he saw his little shack burn down, and heard the frightening cries of rage as the villagers discovered he wasn't within the burning wreckage. He turned away and urged his horse faster , trying to get as far away from the villager's burning desire to see him dead.
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