Ultimate "Oz"

The Overlord

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You know this series would be the perfect place for Punisher to finish off Jigsaw. Jigsaw in prison gets a crew and pursues his only real goal in life, killing Frank Castle. Through out the first couple of issues Jigsaw and his crew are trying to take the Punisher, but it always ends with Jigsaw's mooks being killed in nasty ways.

During the riot that Johnny Bravo described so well, Frank is taking pot shots at the rioting factions on the prison when Jigsaw's crew come up from the stair well. Punisher starts slaugthering the crew when Jigsaw sneaks up and tosses a stun grenade at Frank. Jigsaw knocks the AK-47 out of Frank's hands and is about to shoot Frank in the head with his own hand gun, when Punisher bites Jigsaw's hand and forces him drop the gun.

Punisher and Jigsaw both pull out knifes and get into a brutal knife fight. Jigsaw is screaming at Frank like a psycho, while Frank maintains a cool head. Frank eventually stabs Jigsaw in the heart and kicks him off the roof. Frank then picks up the AK-47 and starts shooting at the convicts again.
 
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Johnny Bravo said:
Purple Man could just be in for murder, and most people just think he's a freak/mutant?Over the series he gradually turns the prison into his personal empire, except its very subtly done and viewers aren't really sure what he's up to. Towards the end of the first season he overthrows the owl, but he doesn't kill him. Killgrave's too arrogant to think that the Owl could be any threat to him because of his powers, so Purple ties him to the railings on the top floor of the prison as an example to anyone who could stand up to him.

Directly after this, Killgrave enlarges his control over the prison and instead of just his faction he tries to control everyone.Killgrave's not as powerful as he thinks, and a few people start to slip away......like Tombstone, Gladiator, Robertson, Punisher, and Sinister.A few cops as well.Tombstone's still(apparently) loyal to the Owl,and Killgrave thinks he controls him.Tombstone works his way up to Purple's top level and is one of his guards.Killgrave's control is getting weaker and weaker,yet he doesn't realize.Inmates are training every day, Purple's planning to pull off a jailbreak and try to use his new army to wrestle a piece of the underworld once they get out.

About a weak after he was overthrown the Owl's nearly dead from starvation and the beatings he got from Killgrave's men. Somehow he gets freed by Tombstone, so Purple(along with everyone else) wakes up one morning and suddenly Purple's symbol of power has gone walkies.Purple's goin' psycho, and everyone else thinks he killed him.Owl's followers start to come around, and they're not happy.Tombstone sends them all a message saying to ready at lunchtime cuz Killgrave's gonna make a speech,and when he does they're gonna riot.Killgrave's confidence is shot to **** as he thought he could control everyone, but clearly someone got past him.And if one person can,so can two?Or three?Lunchtime arrives and There's been a segment removed from the upper level, for Purple to make a speech from.Killgrave is walking towards it & every inmate is gathered below.Sinister and some other enforcer are flanking Killgrave.Suddenly, a gunshot rings out, and the Owl is thrown from the top level, dead from a shot to the head, right before Purple arrives at the edge.Crowd are going crazy,Purple doesn't know what the **** to do.Suddenly someone in the crowd shouts out "Purple murdered the Owl!Wring his neck!" Crowd turns into one giant brawl, some people running for cover, some tryin to get to the higher levels to either defend or attack Purple.Last shot of the episode is Tombstone with a gun in his hand, smiling.

Finale:The riots have been on for two hours.Tombstones guys have blocked all the doors to outside so Purple can't get out, and are operating like a guerilla force.Purple's hiding on the top floor, crying like a baby.His guys are getting massacred cuz they're still under his control and he can't do **** right now.One of his lieutenants,preferably Sinister, walks into his office and tells him to get it together if he wants to get out alive.Killgrave whines that he can't, he's not strong enough, blah blah blah.The guy is a complete mess."Lieutenant" tells him he can still win,but only if he stops acting like some little ***** being raped in the showers.He drops a syringe on the table and walks out.Its got MGH in it.Rets of the episode is all-out war between Purple and Tombstone, with Castle basically butchering anyone who comes his way, Gladiator and Robertson hiding until its over, Sinister making a run for it as soon as Purple's forces make an opening, and the inevitable "every single grudge that was ever mentioned being settled" stuff.Purple's crazy powerful now, and he ends up winning.He's got Tombstone prisoner, and he's making him do some pretty gruesome ****(would say what,but all-ages site and such :wink: ).Police load the prison with sleeping gas and burst in.Tombstone's built like a tank as opposed to the fairly physically weak Purple.We see SWAT teams breaking down the barricades and storming in, while Tombstone guts Purple like a fish.

End of Season One
:lol: just started writing and kinda lost control.......any thoughts?Think of each paragraph as an "episode."

That's awesome man.
 

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I think at this point, after this point we can also assign "roles" to the various characters:

Owl: The guy who really runs the prison. Smuggles in drugs and controls the prison that way. Is a snob, thinks he is more intelligent than everyone else. The prisoner that makes the most use out of the prison library.

Tombstone: Owl's enforcer. Big mean, albino guy, likes to beat people to death. Built like a Tank. Everyone thinks he is stupid, but he has a lot of street smarts and his own agenda.

Purple Man: the guy who plans on getting control of the prison, is also a psycho rapist.

Bullseye: Loner psycho. Will kill anyone who looks at him cross eyed.

Bushwacker: The religious guy, is pretty silent a lot of the time, though prone to fits of rage when he feels his beliefs are threatened.

Punisher: Vigilant who will try to kill as many as the other prisoners as he can.

Jigsaw: Obessive psycho who will take any means to kill Punsher.

Gladiator: Gentle giant, working hard to defeat his inner demons and become an honest citizen.

Joe Robertson: framed and unjustly imprisoned. Will others on the outside are trying to clear his name, he has to survive Rikers.
 

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Remember the original idea was to have Sinister play the prophetic guy. He's powerless now so it would've worked out perfectly. I know he may get out in this upcoming arc but we'll see what goes down.

This would make an interesting appearance for Ultimate Cloak as well. Only the idea I have in mind is similar to the Ultimate Ghost Rider one I had.
 

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TheManWithoutFear said:
Remember the original idea was to have Sinister play the prophetic guy. He's powerless now so it would've worked out perfectly. I know he may get out in this upcoming arc but we'll see what goes down.

This would make an interesting appearance for Ultimate Cloak as well. Only the idea I have in mind is similar to the Ultimate Ghost Rider one I had.

When did Sinister lose his powers? Besides I am sure Sinister is serving time at the Trisk at the end of Tempest arc, not Rikers.
 

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The Overlord said:
When did Sinister lose his powers? Besides I am sure Sinister is serving time at the Trisk at the end of Tempest arc, not Rikers.

Agreed.

BTW, nice ideas you guys are throwing around.
 

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The Overlord said:
When did Sinister lose his powers? Besides I am sure Sinister is serving time at the Trisk at the end of Tempest arc, not Rikers.
I'm sure he is too. But he's got nothing right now because Apocolypse is where his powers come from. I think people agree with that because I remember them saying that he would further his powers through his experiments because he had lost them without Apoc's aid. The thought I had intended was he would be moved to Riker's shortly after the Trisk found him without powers.
 

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TheManWithoutFear said:
I'm sure he is too. But he's got nothing right now because Apocolypse is where his powers come from. I think people agree with that because I remember them saying that he would further his powers through his experiments because he had lost them without Apoc's aid. The thought I had intended was he would be moved to Riker's shortly after the Trisk found him without powers.

We are not even sure that Apoc really exists or if he is only an insane delusions of Sinister. Besides I have seen no evidence that he has truly lost his powers.
 

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I also think Turk should show up now and again in Rikers, he could play the role of loavable loser.
 

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