Crossover

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Crossover - Chapter 6.

Written by guest writer Elfreo.

The crew of the spaceship Bebop run into a strange storm in space. After crash landing on a desert planet. They find the biggest bounty of their lifes. The Human Typone, Vash The Stampede. With $$1,000,000,000 dollars on his head. They go after him. And who is this other outlaw locked away?
 
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Dr_Draco said:
Wow, this is some pretty good stuff so far. Looking forward to future installments :).

Thank you and welcome yourself. I'm going to give him one more week to get with me about the next chapter or I'm going to write it myself.
 
That solicit confuses me. Your guest writer hasn't been on for a while.
 
ProjectX2 said:
That solicit confuses me. Your guest writer hasn't been on for a while.

he pmed me a month ago saying he's was almost done with the 1st chapter. Havn't heard from him since. Might as well write it myself.
 
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Trigun - On a barren, dusty planet baked by the rays of two suns, colonists eke out a miserable existence in small settlements reminiscent of the Wild West. It has been hundreds of years since the Ship brought them to this world; people know the old stories but no one remembers the lost technology that allows them to raise crops on this inhospitable land. In this lawless time stands a lone gunman. His name is Vash the Stampede. He is the Humanoid Typhoon, the man responsible for wiping out the entire city of July. The price on his head: $$60 billion (double dollars). Truly a man to be dreaded. Where he goes, destruction follows. But in reality Vash is a kind hearted man that would never take a life to matter what.

Cowboy Bebop - is the tale of a futuristic maverick, Spike Spiegel, a space cowboy and his band of partners (Jet Black, Faye Valentine, Edward, and lets not forget Ein the dog), as they race across the galaxy on daring adventures. They are Bounty Hunters struggling to survive in a world that is a strange combination of past, present, and future. There are fantastic space crafts and interstellar casinos side by side with droopy sombreros and slow traffic lights. With each new bounty that they go after, new characters are introduced, and new cosmic landscapes are explored.

Chapter Six - Outlaws.

Somewhere in deep space lies the spaceship, Bebop. Spike Spiegel is a bounty hunter. He is a very handsome man. He has black sloppy hair. He wears a blue suit and is a skinny man. Current he is planning something.

"Let see, all we have left to eat are these pancakes," he told himself. "I have to make this quick before the others get back."

He starts to inhale the food as fast as he could. Then a beautiful woman named Faye Valentine enters the room. She has semi short blueish black. She wears a yellow tub-top showing off her best assets, yellow very small shorts, and a red sweater that she drapes around her arms. She was very curvy.

"What the hell do you think you are doing!?" she snapped at him. "I thought you said we were out of food."

She walked him whacked him in the back of the head.

"FOOD!", said a young skinny girl in a white shirt and black shorts. She has goggles a top her head and has red sloppy hair. "Me and Ein are hunnnggryyy"

She started to roll on the ground toward Spike and Faye with a little brown and white dog following her.

"Ed, I found him first!" yelled Faye.

"Get away, both of you," said Spike holding his food away from them. "This is mine."

"I can't believe you would hold out on your best friend, Spike"

Spike looked toward the doorway to see a large built man with a metal arm and eye. He's bald with a black goatee. He wears clothes of a mechanic.

"You'll do the same Jet."

The four of them all started to wrestle over the pancakes when something shook the entire spaceship.

"What was that?"

Jet ran toward the control room. The others followed him. He looked out and didn't believe what he saw. A storm was traveling though space.

"What the hell is that?" asked Faye. "That's not possible."

"I don't but we are heading right for it."

The ship cracked and shook violently in the storm. They came out of it.

"We have to land somewhere. We can't fly like this." pointed out Jet.

"Over there," said Spike as he pointed toward a brown planet.

"I've never seen that planet before," wondered Faye.

"OHHH I wonder if they have aliens," added Ed.

They landed the ship on the planet. The planet was a desert planet, void of planet life and oceans cause of the two suns over the planet.

"Me and Faye will take our ships and look for a city or something," Spike told the others.

Faye got into her pink one-man ship and Spike got into his blue one. They flew off into different directions looking for some sort of life.

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"I'm so hungry," whined a blond spiky hair man in a red trench-coat that covered his whole body.

"Quit your whining Vash," snapped a young woman in white clothes with short black hair. "We'll almost there."

Vash just shut up and went back to pouting. He looked up and saw they were coming to the city. He instantly perked up. They pulled up to the town entrance.

"What business do you ladies have here?" asked a man at the entrance of town.

"I'm Meryl Streep and this is Millie Thompson," answered the woman from before. She pointed to a taller young woman with long blond hair. She wore a yellow and white dress. "We're from the Bernadelli Insurance company."

"Oh in that case welcome. But I warn you that there is news that the Humanoid Typhoon, Vash The Stampede is heading here."

"We'll I guess it's good that we have our trusty body guard here," she told him as she pointed at Vash.

"He doesn't look like much," pointed out the guard. "Continue on."

They pulled up to a tavern and went inside. The three sat down at a table. A waitress comes up and takes there order. The three sat there for a while then a strange looking man walked into the tavern. He walked up to the bar and ordered a drink. For some reason Vash could not take his eyes off this man. He seemed different somehow. Then another man walked up behind him.

"You're in my seat, partner," said the outlaw.

"I'm not finished with my drink." answered the man.
"You are now," commanded the outlaw as he pulled out a gun and pointed it into his back.

The man put his hands into the air. Vash started to put his hand around his gun. The whole tavern went quiet and was watching this. The man stood up slowly and turned around to look the outlaw in the eyes.

"That's a smart boy," smirked the outlaw.

The man suddenly head butted the outlaw in the face. The outlaw grabbed his face in pain. The man kicked the gun out of his hands. The outlaw tried to punch him but the man grabbed his arm and flipped him over onto the ground. He sat back down, finished his drink, and went back outside. Vash got up to follow him.

"Where's Vash going Meryl?" asked Millie.

Meryl didn't answer, but stared outside.

"Excuse me!" yelled Vash after the man.

The man stopped and looked back confused.

"Yes."

"That was very impressive the way you handled that outlaw. I've never seen moves like that."

"That was nothing."

"What brings you to this city?"

"A ship of mine broke down and I'm looking for help"

"I could help. I know a thing or two about machines. I'm Vash by the way."

"I'm Spike. I don't have anything to pay you with."

"That's fine. I wouldn't accept it anyway."

Vash looked over to see Millie and Meryl coming toward him.

"He isn't bothering you is he?" she asked Spike while she grabbed Vash's ear.

"No he just offered to help me fix my ship."

"Okay," she said as she let go of his ear.

"What's wrong with your ship Mr...," added Millie.

"Just Spike. It broke down and needs someone to help fix it."

"Let's see it," suggested Vash as he rubbed his ear.

"This way."

The four of them walked off.

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"Ed what are you doing?" sighed Jet.

"Me and Ein are fixing the ship," she answered hammering on something.

"Get down from there before you hurt yourself or even worse, break something"

"I'm back," says Spike as he walked toward Jet with Vash, Meryl, and Millie. "I brought help."

"Wow this is incredible ship Mr.Spike," Millie said in awe.

"You guys aren't from this planet are you?" asked Vash checking out the ship.

"Yeah," answered Jet.

"I didn't know that humans still lived elsewhere besides this planet."

Then Ed fell from above but got caught in a wire and came face to face with Vash but was still upside down.

"Well hello there," greeted Vash.

"HELLLOOOO," answered Ed swinging back and forth.

"Hey guys I have great news!" yelled Faye running toward them.

Vash's eyes lit up and he ran toward her.

"I've never seen such beauty," he told her grabbing her hand. "I want you to marry me."

"Huh?"

Then a hammer came flying and hit Vash in the back of the head.

"That was kind of harsh, wasn't it Meryl?" asked Millie.

"What is the news, Faye?" asked Spike.

"I just got word of the biggest bounty ever. Sixty Billion Double Dollars, whatever those are."

"Are you serious? We never have to work again with that kind of money," screamed Jet.

Vash, Meryl, and Millie all exchanged nervous looks.

"You guys are bounty hunters?" asked Vash.

"Yes," answered Jet. "Who is the bounty?"

"Some tall blond man with a red coat and a big silver gun. I trying to think of the name."

"That's all you got?" questioned Spike.

"No I got the name but it slipped my mind. Something the Stampede."

Ed walked over to Vash. She stared at him for a second.

"He has all these things," yelled Ed grabbing Vash's coat.

Spike looked over and got an excited look on his face.

"Faye, was the name Vash The Stampede?"

"That was it."

Vash pulled out his gun.

"I hate bounty hunters."
 
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Trigun and Cowboy Bebop are my favorite anime, and I like how this one turned out. Can't wait to see how the conflict ends up.

:rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:
 
Not bad of a story. Thought it was good.

But are you having someone edit for you? I'm seeing some grammar mistakes and spelling errors here and there. Not a big deal, but you might want that checked. Also, a little more details would help, as well. Trust me. I hear that all the time. :wink:
 
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Trigun - On a barren, dusty planet baked by the rays of two suns, colonists eke out a miserable existence in small settlements reminiscent of the Wild West. It has been hundreds of years since the Ship brought them to this world; people know the old stories but no one remembers the lost technology that allows them to raise crops on this inhospitable land. In this lawless time stands a lone gunman. His name is Vash the Stampede. He is the Humanoid Typhoon, the man responsible for wiping out the entire city of July. The price on his head: $$60 billion (double dollars). Truly a man to be dreaded. Where he goes, destruction follows. But in reality Vash is a kind hearted man that would never take a life to matter what.

Cowboy Bebop - is the tale of a futuristic maverick, Spike Spiegel, a space cowboy and his band of partners (Jet Black, Faye Valentine, Edward, and lets not forget Ein the dog), as they race across the galaxy on daring adventures. They are Bounty Hunters struggling to survive in a world that is a strange combination of past, present, and future. There are fantastic space crafts and interstellar casinos side by side with droopy sombreros and slow traffic lights. With each new bounty that they go after, new characters are introduced, and new cosmic landscapes are explored.

Chapter Seven - Outlaws - Part 2.

Gunshots explode across the barren desert planet of Gunsmoke. Spike, hiding behind a rock, looks out and starts shooting Vash. Vash easily dodge the shots and shoots his gun clipping Spike's shoulder.

"Ow, bastard," mumbled Spike as he holds his shoulder.

Faye sneaks up behind Vash and grabs him.

"Stop struggling," she said.

Vash wiggled his way out and managed to grope her causing her top to almost pop off at the sametime.

"You pervert!" she screamed holding her top.

Vash ran towards some rocks over on some hills. He ran and hid himself in the rocks. Jet ran after him. He walked around slowly but didn't notice Vash coming up behind up. Vash whacked him in the back of the head with his gun, knocking him unconscious. Vash came down on the other side of the hill and splinted back to the town. He didn't get far when he heard a engine above him. He looked back and seen Spike in a flying ship and Faye in a pink one.

"AHHHHH!" he screamed like a girl.

They started to shoot him. He rolled across the sand and shoot 4 shoots to the bottom of Faye's ship. This caused it to steer of course at run into Spike. They crashed into the ground. Vash took off again.

"Get off of me," Faye told Spike.

"No you get off of me."

"Who in the hell is that guy?"

"I don't know, but he's going down like everyone else," Spike said as he brushed dirt off of him.

Vash found his way back to the town. He went a hid in some alley.

"Oh I forgot about the insurance girls. They must still be back there."

Millie and Meryl were still at the ship. They didn't know what to do, so they started to walk back to town before those bounty hunters get back.

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"Now are ships are broken too," complained Faye.

"We can fix them with the bounty," said Jet holding a ice pack on his head.

"Well we obviously can't beat him in a firefight," pointed out Spike. "I'm going to fight him hand to hand."

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Later that night, Millie and Meryl caught up to Vash. They are hiding out in an inn.

"Why are you always so much trouble?" Meryl asked Vash.

"Dunno," he answered while looking asleep.

"Well tomorrow we'll leave the town and hopefully give them the slip."

"Meryl, I'm going to do downstairs and get some water."

"Okay Millie but hurray back."

Millie walked out of the room and went downstairs. She went into the small tavern they have in the bottom. She sat down and ordered her water. She overheard two guys talking next to her.

"Did you hear about the guy they arrested earlier today?"

"No."

"Well I guess he killed two people and injured five others."

"Really"

"Yeah he did it with his barehands too, I guess the guys were trying to rob him."

"Then why did they arrest him?"

"Because they decided someone that dangerous shouldn't be allowed to wander around. So their keeping him locked up until they found out who he is."

"Wow."

"That's not the strangest part either, the guy had the weirdest eyes I've ever seen."

"What do you mean?"

"They glowed purple. I never seen anything like it."

"Well I have other news."

"What's that?"

"I have it on good information that Vash The Stampede is in town also."

"Really. Damn, let's hope that those two don't meet up."

Millie finished her water and went back up stairs, thinking about what she heard. She thought it wouldn't matter since they are leaving tomorrow.

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"He's in there," pointed Faye at the hotel. "The townspeople said they saw a man in a red coat enter there with two females."

"Well what are we waiting for?" asked Spike.

Spike ran into the building while Faye waited outside. He kicked in the door and yelled freeze. He just saw Millie and Meryl looking at him with surprise. Then the door swung back and hit him in the face. Vash jumped out from behind it. Spike went to chop him but Vash ducked. Spike sent a quick kick his way but Vash blocked with a nearby table, causing Spike to put his leg though it. Spike smashed it against the ground. He elbowed Vash in the gut and kicked him causing him to fall through the window. Faye stood above him with her gun in his face.

"Don't move," she commanded.

He grabbed her gun and ripped it out of her hand before she could react. Spike came up behind him and put his gun to his face only to have Vash do the same.

"Freeze!"

Vash and Spike looked over only to see the sheriff and some others surrounding them.

Faye sneaked away during this.

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"You have two new cellmates," said the sheriff to a man wrapped in chains.

Vash looked at the man and got a weird vibes from him. The sheriff chained Vash and Spike also.

"Oh crap," said Spike. "Look what you got us into."

Vash kept staring at the other man. The man looked at Vash.

"You have a problem?" asked the man in a deep voice.

"No, but can I ask your name?"

The man thought for a second then pulled off the goggles on his head. He looked Vash in the eyes. His eyes shined a bright purple.

"Riddick."
 
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Ooooh, Riddick!!!! :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:

This friggin' rocks. Talk about a fanboy's wet dream come true. :shock:

Can't wait for the next part.
 
(REPOST)

Crossover
Chapter Nine - Outlaws - Part 3

Vash, Spike, and Riddick all escape prison. But what happens when these outlaws bump heads. It's Vash vs Riddick. This is the final part of outlaws and leads directly into Space Wars.

Coming tomorrow.
 
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Trigun - On a barren, dusty planet baked by the rays of two suns, colonists eke out a miserable existence in small settlements reminiscent of the Wild West. It has been hundreds of years since the Ship brought them to this world; people know the old stories but no one remembers the lost technology that allows them to raise crops on this inhospitable land. In this lawless time stands a lone gunman. His name is Vash the Stampede. He is the Humanoid Typhoon, the man responsible for wiping out the entire city of July. The price on his head: $$60 billion (double dollars). Truly a man to be dreaded. Where he goes, destruction follows. But in reality Vash is a kind hearted man that would never take a life to matter what.

Cowboy Bebop - is the tale of a futuristic maverick, Spike Spiegel, a space cowboy and his band of partners (Jet Black, Faye Valentine, Edward, and lets not forget Ein the dog), as they race across the galaxy on daring adventures. They are Bounty Hunters struggling to survive in a world that is a strange combination of past, present, and future. There are fantastic space crafts and interstellar casinos side by side with droopy sombreros and slow traffic lights. With each new bounty that they go after, new characters are introduced, and new cosmic landscapes are explored.

Riddick - A con living in the out skirts of space. He is a deadly man that murdered many people. In prison he had his eyes shine to be able to see in the dark.

Chapter Six - Outlaws - Part 3.

"What the hell is wrong with your eyes?" asked Spike.

Riddick didn't answer but sat there in silence. Three of them sat in silence for about an hour, each of them planning a way to escape.

"What are you in for?" Spike then asked him.

"Nothing, just passing though." He answered.

Elsewhere, Faye was back at the ship with Jet and Ed.

"Spike's been arrested," she told them.

"How are we going to get him out?" asked Jet.

"Who cares about him?" she countered. "Our bounty was arrested too. How are we going to get him out?"

Jet just gave Faye a strange look

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Back at the prison, the sheriff was talking to Meryl and Millie.

"We are from the Bernadelli Insurance Company. Your prisoner is in our charge and we demand you release him this instant," commanded Meryl.

"He's not going anywhere miss."

"But..."

"This isn't up for discussion. You have a complaint than fill out a form and put it in the box. Otherwise get out of my office or I'll arrest you too."

They both walked out. The sheriff went back to the jail cells.

"Dinnertime, creeps."

He unlocked the cell and walks over to Spike and hands him a tray. Spike starts to scarf it down. He hands one to Vash, who thanks him. He goes over to Riddick and hands it to him. Riddick takes the tray and then rams it into his stomach. He grabs the sheriff's head and rams it into his knee. He grabs his keys and unlocks himself.

"What about me?" yells Spike with food still in his mouth.

Riddick ignores him and leaves. He walks out of the front door and passes Jet who is walking in. Jet walked to the desk and doesn't see anyone.

"Hello? I need some help here," he shouts.

"Jet, back here," Spike yells back.

Jet walks back to the cells. He sees the cop laying on the ground knocked out cold.

"What happened?"

"Some maniac knocked out the cop and took off. Now let me out of here."

Jet went over and locked Spike. He threw the key on the ground. Spike stretched and then looked over at Vash.

"What are we going to do about him?" Spike asked.

"I have an idea."

They unlocked the chains from the walls but left Vash chained up.

"Come on guys. Can't we talk about this?"

"Shut up," warned Spike.

They started walking out but Vash tripped. Spike sighed and picked him back up.

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They ended up back at the ship with the sun going down.

"Faye!" yelled Spike.

Faye walks out at gives him a strange look.

"How in the hell did you get out?"

"Not important. Just find a place for him while we found out how to collect our bounty," he says as he throws Vash on the ground.

She goes and picks him up. She starts to walk him when she feels a hand grab her butt. She looked back and saw that Vash somehow managed to wiggle his hand free to get a handful. She turns and smacks him in the face hard.

"You pervert."

She throws him in a room in the ship and shuts the door. As soon he was sure she was gone. He reached into his pocket and pulled out the key he picked up when he fell back in the cell. He goes to the door and opens it. He peaks out and sees the corridor is empty. He slowly walks out and then goes around a corner. Vash looks down and sees the dog Ein staring at him.

"Shhh, good dog."

He bends down to pet him and he lets out a loud bark. Vash twitches at this. He looks around and no one comes. He starts to walk again when something comes flying down from a panel in the ceiling. Ed lands in front of Vash. She tilts her head and looks at him.

"What are you doing?" she wonders.

"Umm, I'm going to get us some candy."

"Really!?"

"Yes, but it's a surprise so you can't tell anyone you seen me."

"OKAAAYYYY."

Then she rolled off.

"What a weird kid," Vash thought to himself.

He soon found the exit to the ship and ran off toward town in the darkness of the night.

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"Did you hear Meryl?" asked Millie. "Vash and that guys broke out of jail."

"What an idiot. He couldn't wait for us to get him free."

"Psst."

Meryl and Millie looked over and seen someone hiding in an alley.

"Vash?"

"We need to get out of here before the sheriff and those bounty hunters realize I escaped."

"Hey!" someone yelled out of a near by tavern as someone walked out. "You owe my friend an apology."

"No, I don't"

Vash then noticed that the man walking out is Riddick. The man from the jail. Two big guys come up behind him. One grabs him on the shoulder.

"I would get your hand off of me, friend."

"Now I don't think you are in a position to be telling us what to do," said one of the men.

Vash could tell that these men were outlaws. One of them started to pull a knife out.

"Look out!" Vash yelled.

Riddick flipped around and grabbed the guy's hand as he stabbed at him. He twisted his arm and the man dropped the knife. Riddick picked it up. The second man swung at him but Riddick ducked and stabbed him in the chest.

"No!" Vash cried out.

Riddick then gave the other an elbow to the face knocking him over. Then put the knife to the man's throat. Riddick then felt a gun pressed against the back of his head.

'Let him go," Vash said firmly.

Riddick brought the knife off his throat and stood up.

"This isn't any of your business," he told Vash.

"You took that man's life. What gives you that right?"

"We all die sometime, might as well leave it to a professional."

Riddick turned around to face Vash.

"You must answer for this."

"I don't."

He swung the knife at Vash's face. Vash moved out of the way just enough that it gave him a small cut on the cheek. He rushed Vash again but Vash grabbed his wrist and they both pushed back and forth with the knife. Vash pulled to the right, throwing Riddick off balance. Vash then heard a humming sound coming toward him. He flipped around and seen Faye flying toward him in her pink ship. A claw thing came out of the bottom and snatched Vash.

"Not again!"

Riddick saw this and jumped and grabbed Vash's feet going with them.

"Get off!" yelled Faye. She flew out of the town. The combine weight of both Vash and Riddick caused Vash to slip out of the claw. They both landed on the ground with a thud. It was pitch black due to the many moons being to low to cast much light. Riddick took off his goggles. He vision shined a bright purple. He could see everything perfect. He ran and tackled Vash. Faye landed her ship and came running toward them. She raised her gun toward Riddick.

"He's our bounty."

"Is that so?"

Riddick threw sand in her eyes. He tripped her and ran to her ship. He started it up.

"He's getting away!" screamed Vash running toward the ship.

Riddick took off into the air and flew off the planet.

"I can finally leave this dirt heap."

He looked out and saw that strange storm from before.

"Not this again."

He flew into it. The ship started shaking violently. When he came out, he crashed into a small hill. He climbed out of the wreckage. He looked around and saw hundreds of strange eggs around him. He heard a noise and looked over and seen a black lizard looking thing with acid flowing from the mouth.

"Hell."
 
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Out of the frying pan and into the fire for Riddick :mrgreen: .

Another solid issue, me likey... :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:
 
Dr_Draco said:
Out of the frying pan and into the fire for Riddick :mrgreen: .

Another solid issue, me likey... :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:

Thank you.

I would like to thank Elfreo for the idea to include Riddick in it. Awesome. Next up is Space Wars.
 
Well, the inclusion was definitely a good choice.

So Space Wars? Hmmm... Star Wars/Predator/Alien/Riddick? The speculation is gonna drive me mad :p.
 
I haven't been posting, but I have read the chapters. This story may be your best yet. The usual of grammar and spelling, but nothing to that really distracts. Best thing you can do is write a couple of chapters ahead of time, and have someone read them over. If you can't, don't worry about it. Chapters are still a good job done.
 
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Riddick - A con living in the out skirts of space. He is a deadly man that murdered many people. In prison he had his eyes shine to be able to see in the dark.

Aliens - The eponymous alien creature, a lethal predator with consistently exotic abilities and physical attributes, reproduces by parasitizing living victims with embryos; or by transmuting them directly into the early alien reproductive stages (egg and facehugger) through unknown means. The blood of these creatures is a very deadly form of acid.

Crossover
Chapter Nine "Space Wars - Part 1"

"Hell."

Riddick stood and stared at the creature that was inching towards him. It was black and had a head that formed out like a football pointing forwards. The planet was dark and ash was very thick in the air. Jagged rocks covered the ground along with the alien eggs. The creature let out a deep hiss and acid dripped and fell to the ground. The started to shift into a pouncing stance. Riddick saw this and was ready for it. The alien launched towards Riddick. Riddick shifted his body to the right, dodging it. The alien smacked into one of the rock pillars, shattering it. Riddick picked up one of the jagged piece and held it like a knife. He rammed it into the skull of the alien. It let out a loud scream. Riddick quickly moved his hand as the acid spilled out of it's wound. Riddick then grabbed another piece of rock and started to move.

Riddick walked for awhile, surviving his surroundings. He stopped and rested at the bottom of a hill. He sat there for while when he realized that he had been followed. He turned and seen three of the creatures coming down the hill towards him. He started to run and they followed. He ran around a group of 10 foot rocks into another group of five aliens. Riddick knew he was in trouble, but he would take a many as he could. 4 of them launched again at Riddick but ran into a bright green wall of light that appeared out of nowhere.

"Looks like you need help," said a man hovering in the air, dressed in a green and black uniform of some kind. He had a strange green glow around him that seem to stem from the glowing ring on his finger.

"I could of handled them," answered Riddick.

"I bet."

The green man created a shovel next and picked up a few of the aliens and tossed them. Then he created a man in a golf outfit and smacked some with a golf club.

"We must go. Get on."

A small green circular platform appeared in front of Riddick. Riddick climbed on and they flew into the air.

"Who are you?" Riddick asked.

"I'm a Green Lantern."

>>Green Lantern - Kyle Rayner was a struggling freelance artist when he was approached by the last Guardian of the Universe, Ganthet, to become a new Green Lantern with the last power ring. Ganthet did not choose Rayner for any particular reason; he simply needed to find someone to fill the role.<<


"A what?"

"A Green Lantern. I'm surprised you never heard of us. We are intergalactic cops."

"Cops, great."

"My name is Kyle by the way."

"Riddick."

Riddick saw them coming upon what looks like a old abandon building. They landed in front of it.

"Follow me."

They went in and turned a corner. The walls looked to have dried blood across them. The smell was hard to ignore and very sickening. Riddick was used to the smell of blood but this was different. It was very nausting.

"What happened?" asked Riddick,

"We think that those aliens attacked whoever lived here and slaughtered them."

"We?"

"Yeah, there is another person."

They walked though a sliding door into a room that looked like some dining area. Some of the tables were overturned and there was food, blood, and trash everywhere. A man sat at one of the tables, dressed in a brown coat that covered his body with a hood covering his face.

"I see you found a friend," said the man as he pulled the hood back. He was in his late 20's, early 30's. He had semi-long brown hair with a full grown beard.

"Riddick, meet Obi-Wan Kenobi," said Kyle.

>>Obi-Wan Kenobi - Trained as a youngling in the Jedi Temple under Yoda. Without a Jedi teacher at the age of thirteen, however, Kenobi would have been appointed to work in agricultural labor, where he might never have reached his full potential. Eventually he was accepted by Master Qui-Gon Jinn as a padawan learner. Who became a Jedi master after Qui-Gon was killed<<


Obi-Wan reached his hand out but Riddick didn't return the favor.

"Anyways, what bought you to this planet Riddick?" asked Kyle.

"I went through some storm in space and landed here."

"We both went through similar storms," explained Obi-Wan.

"It must of some kind of wormhole or something," added Kyle.

"How long have you been here?" Riddick asked.

"A couple of days," answered Obi-Wan. "From what I can tell, these aliens are all over the planet. You are the first other person we have seen."

"It's only a matter of time before they find there way here. I normality could use my ring to transport us off but it's low on power."

"Is there a place I can lay down?"

"Yes the dorms are this way."

Obi-Wan led Riddick to a bed where he laid down. Obi-Wan returned to the dining area.

"So what do you think of him?" asked Kyle.

"I'm not sure. I sense lots of anger and passion in him. But I think he can trust him for now."

A couple hours pass and Riddick wakes up and gets out of bed while rubbing his eyes. He jumped up and went to dining room, but no one was around.

"HEY!"

"We are in here Riddick," he heard them shout from another room.

Riddick found them in a room that looks like a medical faculty of some kind.

"We decided it's time to explore the island some more," Kyle told Riddick. "We already got the food and supplies ready."

"Is there any weapons?"

"There is an armory down the hall to your left."

Riddick went to the armory and found weapons of all kind.

"Nice."

He started loading up all he could. He found a pack and loaded a shotgun and two handguns. He found a jagged knife that he strapped to his leg. He swung a machine gun around his neck. He looked over and saw something that made him smile.

"That's just what I need."

He took it off the wall and loaded it into the bag along with extra ammo.

"Time to go Riddick," Kyle yelled down to him.

Riddick swung the bad over his shoulder and went after them. The three of them went outside and started walking, Riddick pulled Obi-Wan to the side.

"I don't know about Mr.Green over there but if you fall behind, you get left behind."

"I think I can handle myself."

They walked for awhile. Saying nothing almost the whole journey. They started walking though a ravine. Then Riddick just stopped and looked around.

"What is it?" asked Kyle.

Riddick said nothing but took off his goggles. His eyes shined a deep purple like mini flashlights.

"What is with your eyes?" wondered Kyle.

"Shh," Obi-Wan told him.

Riddick looked up and seen 5 of the aliens coming down towards them on the cliff wall. He lifted his machine gun and started unloading on one. It fell down dead. The acid poured and hissed out of the body. The other 4 jumped down, but Kyle put up a force field and they just bounced off. Riddick raised his gun and before he could react, Obi-Wan jumped over him and landed on one of them. He pulled out a small handle of some kind and a bright blue blade of light came out of it. The sound when it came out sounded like a toilet flushing. It hummed. Obi-Wan raised his hand and seemed to push one the aliens into the wall without touching him. One came up behind him and he cut the head off with the sword without even turning around. The last one charged at him he sliced it right down the middle. He depowered the sword and walked back towards them. He looked at Riddick.

"If you fall behind, you get left behind."

"What the hell are you?"

"I'm a Jedi Knight."

"A what?"

"A Jedi Knight is someone who upholds peace in the galaxy.

"Great, another cop."

"What is that blade?"

"It's called a light saber. All Jedi's use them."

"I need to get me one."

They went on there way when now Obi-Wan stops.

"We have to go that way," he said as he pointed to a small hill.

"Why?" wondered Kyle.

"I sense someone."

"You sense someone?" Riddick mocked,

"It's how we found you," pointed out Kyle. "It's go see who it is."

"But it's weird. It's seems familiar."

They made their way up the hill and stopped at the top.

"No way..."said a shocked Obi-Wan.

Down below was about a dozen or more aliens surrounding a man in black ropes with a hood like Obi-Wans over his head. He pulled it back to reveal a red and black tattooed face with horns a top his head.

"Do you this guy?" asked Riddick.

"That's Darth Maul. He killed my master."

>>Darth Maul - Indoctrinated in the ways of the dark side from youth, Maul had no emotion aside from bloodlust and rage. During his training, any show of fear was severely punished by Sidious, and any hint of mercy rewarded with cruelty. By the time Maul was an adolescent, his master had already forged him into a weapon of pure hatred. Marked by Sith tattoos that covered his entire muscular body, the young Zabrak was now the ultimate tool of the dark side.<<

Maul pulled out what looked like a longer light saber than Obi-Wan. He turned it on and two red bladed came out on both sides.

"Is he a Jedi too?" asked Kyle.

"No. He is a Sith Master. Jedi uphold the peace while Sith do the opposite. But this is impossible."

"How so?"

"I killed him years ago."
 
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Not a bad chapter. I like how we learned more about the storm-portal. How it doesn't just take people to and from other dimensions, but from different points in time as well.

Looking forward to the next part :rockon:
 

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