This fanfic i'm going to stick with unlike a couple of others i've done.
For the pics i'm using hero machine as I can not be bothered drawing and writing but thought a visual aid for characters would help.
so a preview of the new spider-man costume that will be used in my fan fic

The Phenomenal Spider-man
Saga 1 – The rebirth of a legend.
Chapter 1
A Rooftop. New York 2030. "Not so tough now are you spider-man." Kingpin laughed looking down at Spider-man. Once one of the biggest threats to kingpin's army of crime now laying at his feet. Kingpin may of gotten old but so had Spider-man. No longer the quick speedy spider-man but an old man trying to recapture his glory days.
Mary Jane Watson-Parker had warned Peter that he was too old to pull it off. He new it him self had been retired for 5 years. When he heard the kingpin was back spider-man thought this was it. His chance to prove he still had it.
Over the years some of his powers had been fading. When he fought kingpin he did not know that his Spider-sense had faded and it allowed one of his thugs to sneak up and shoot Spider-man in the back. After all the villains he had beaten like the Green Goblin it was just a normal everyday thug that had beaten spider-man!
Kingpin pulled out his gun and pointed at Spider-man's head. "Bye bye Spider-man" Kingpin laughed. As he whent to pull the tigger another gun was fired. The shot hit kingpin's hand knocking the gun out of his hand. King pin looked up to see S.H.I.E.L.D. agents standing there.
"You're under arrest." One of them told him. Paramedics ran to Spider-man. The lifted him up and placed him on a stretcher. The stretcher was loaded on to the S.H.I.E.L.D. helicopter. "H.. How D…Did You find me?" Spider-man spoke in pain almost passing out from the pain. "Let's just say that's some impressive wife you have there. She was able to track us down. An man you're age should not be doing this anymore." One of the female Paramedics said to Spider-man wife a reassuring smile.
The streets of New York 2036. "Man no one knows hot to hot wire a car like you." Bill told his friend Steve Smith. Steve just looked at him and smirked "That's nothing the night is still young." Steve told as he threw his cigarette out the window. The car started to rise from the ground and flew about 1ft off the ground down the road.
The car was a stylish Porsche turbo 2030. The car was all black and the shape of a dome. It had blacked out windows and had the state of the art Stark antigravity engine. The Stark antigravity engine was developed by Stark Industries. It allows cars to hover off the ground saving on the need for wheels.
The car zoomed down the road at 250 mph. They flew by a police car. The police officer started up his siren. "Be on the look out for an all black Porsche turbo 2030. Suspect is going over 200 mph." The police officer said in tto his radio starting pursuit. "Looks like the pig wants to play." Steve laughed.
Both cars were not slowing down both hovering above ground. "The Suspect just entered the kingdom. I'm pulling out." The officer told him turning around. The kingdom was code name for the part of the city kingpin owned.
After getting out jail kingpin ran for president of the united states. He won!. First thing he did after been president was to get rid of S.H.I.E.L.D. He then moved the whitehouse to New York and took over half the city. When his term was over it was too late the damage was already done. Half of new york was now a crim base that no police had authority in.
"Why did that cop turn away?" Bill asked. "We must be in the kingdom." Steve laughed. His laughter soon faded when the car came to a holt. It was topped by a man who just stuck out his hands and pushed the car till it stopped. "Who is that?" Bill asked.
They saw him. He was wearing a metal Rhino suit. "Oh crap. It's the rhino." Steve said looking out. This was not the same Rhino that spider-man had fought this was a guy who built a robotic Adamantium Rhino suit. He was the son of the first Rhino and works as one of kingpin's enforcers.
"This sardine can needs opening." Rhino laughed as he ripped open the roof and threw it away as if it was nothing. "Outsider's the boss will enjoy teaching you to stay out of out kingdom." Rhino laughed lifting them up by the necks.
He carried them inside the white house (still there as no one can remove it from there.) "Boss I got two outsider's here for you." He spoke to kingpin throwing them on the floor. A big chair turned around. Kingpin looked at them. He pulled out a gun and pointed it at Bill "tell me why should I let you live?" he asked.
With tears in his eyes Bill responded. "I have a wife and two kids. Please don't do this." he begged. Kingpin pulled the tigger. As blood from his own friend splattered on to Steve , He saw the kingpin point the gun at his face. "Same question." Kingpin told him.
Steve had no tears in his eyes he just confidently smirked "Because I'll be a ***** to get out of the carpet." Steve told him. Kingpin laughed. "I like that answer kid. Plus you show no fear. How would you like to work for me." Kingpin asked him. "I would love to work for you." Steve smirked at him.
Else where in New York the now handicapped Peter Parker was reading the news paper. "Last night the kingpin killed another person. His friend and him were joy riding and drove in to the kingdom. He was 19 that's it 19. He had a wife and children."Peter told his wife screwing up the newspaper.
"Don't get yourself worked up. I honestly believe that someone will stop him someday." She told him. "I know but Who? Even the X-men won't get involved as the Professor says that it's legal what he is doing and if a mutant was to stop him people would see them as law breaks and bring even more trouble to mutant kind." Peter told her.
"I know that there are very few heroes left but wait and see. Live by the sword dye by the sword. Every evil ruler eventually gets beat. It happened to Hitler and it'll happen to him." She smiled kissing his lips. "Just you wait and see tiger." She winked before walking in to the kitchen to make breakfast.
Peter wished he could get back out there and do something. Each day he did nothing to stop kingpin he felt like a piece of him died inside. Some nights he would pull out his scrap book of newspaper cuttings of photos he had taken of himself as spider-man and would cry himself to sleep. Something that would upset Mary Jane Watson-Parker every time she saw it.
Even if things seem ok between them now. They were having marriage problems. Peter wished he had died on that rooftop and blames his wife for calling S.H.I.E.L.D. A few times he would drink to feel anything and on occasion has hit his wife across the face. She would divorce him but feels guilty about it as ahe is all he has left and thinks that things will get better for them.
chapter 2 coming soon
For the pics i'm using hero machine as I can not be bothered drawing and writing but thought a visual aid for characters would help.
so a preview of the new spider-man costume that will be used in my fan fic

The Phenomenal Spider-man
Saga 1 – The rebirth of a legend.
Chapter 1
A Rooftop. New York 2030. "Not so tough now are you spider-man." Kingpin laughed looking down at Spider-man. Once one of the biggest threats to kingpin's army of crime now laying at his feet. Kingpin may of gotten old but so had Spider-man. No longer the quick speedy spider-man but an old man trying to recapture his glory days.
Mary Jane Watson-Parker had warned Peter that he was too old to pull it off. He new it him self had been retired for 5 years. When he heard the kingpin was back spider-man thought this was it. His chance to prove he still had it.
Over the years some of his powers had been fading. When he fought kingpin he did not know that his Spider-sense had faded and it allowed one of his thugs to sneak up and shoot Spider-man in the back. After all the villains he had beaten like the Green Goblin it was just a normal everyday thug that had beaten spider-man!
Kingpin pulled out his gun and pointed at Spider-man's head. "Bye bye Spider-man" Kingpin laughed. As he whent to pull the tigger another gun was fired. The shot hit kingpin's hand knocking the gun out of his hand. King pin looked up to see S.H.I.E.L.D. agents standing there.
"You're under arrest." One of them told him. Paramedics ran to Spider-man. The lifted him up and placed him on a stretcher. The stretcher was loaded on to the S.H.I.E.L.D. helicopter. "H.. How D…Did You find me?" Spider-man spoke in pain almost passing out from the pain. "Let's just say that's some impressive wife you have there. She was able to track us down. An man you're age should not be doing this anymore." One of the female Paramedics said to Spider-man wife a reassuring smile.
The streets of New York 2036. "Man no one knows hot to hot wire a car like you." Bill told his friend Steve Smith. Steve just looked at him and smirked "That's nothing the night is still young." Steve told as he threw his cigarette out the window. The car started to rise from the ground and flew about 1ft off the ground down the road.
The car was a stylish Porsche turbo 2030. The car was all black and the shape of a dome. It had blacked out windows and had the state of the art Stark antigravity engine. The Stark antigravity engine was developed by Stark Industries. It allows cars to hover off the ground saving on the need for wheels.
The car zoomed down the road at 250 mph. They flew by a police car. The police officer started up his siren. "Be on the look out for an all black Porsche turbo 2030. Suspect is going over 200 mph." The police officer said in tto his radio starting pursuit. "Looks like the pig wants to play." Steve laughed.
Both cars were not slowing down both hovering above ground. "The Suspect just entered the kingdom. I'm pulling out." The officer told him turning around. The kingdom was code name for the part of the city kingpin owned.
After getting out jail kingpin ran for president of the united states. He won!. First thing he did after been president was to get rid of S.H.I.E.L.D. He then moved the whitehouse to New York and took over half the city. When his term was over it was too late the damage was already done. Half of new york was now a crim base that no police had authority in.
"Why did that cop turn away?" Bill asked. "We must be in the kingdom." Steve laughed. His laughter soon faded when the car came to a holt. It was topped by a man who just stuck out his hands and pushed the car till it stopped. "Who is that?" Bill asked.
They saw him. He was wearing a metal Rhino suit. "Oh crap. It's the rhino." Steve said looking out. This was not the same Rhino that spider-man had fought this was a guy who built a robotic Adamantium Rhino suit. He was the son of the first Rhino and works as one of kingpin's enforcers.
"This sardine can needs opening." Rhino laughed as he ripped open the roof and threw it away as if it was nothing. "Outsider's the boss will enjoy teaching you to stay out of out kingdom." Rhino laughed lifting them up by the necks.
He carried them inside the white house (still there as no one can remove it from there.) "Boss I got two outsider's here for you." He spoke to kingpin throwing them on the floor. A big chair turned around. Kingpin looked at them. He pulled out a gun and pointed it at Bill "tell me why should I let you live?" he asked.
With tears in his eyes Bill responded. "I have a wife and two kids. Please don't do this." he begged. Kingpin pulled the tigger. As blood from his own friend splattered on to Steve , He saw the kingpin point the gun at his face. "Same question." Kingpin told him.
Steve had no tears in his eyes he just confidently smirked "Because I'll be a ***** to get out of the carpet." Steve told him. Kingpin laughed. "I like that answer kid. Plus you show no fear. How would you like to work for me." Kingpin asked him. "I would love to work for you." Steve smirked at him.
Else where in New York the now handicapped Peter Parker was reading the news paper. "Last night the kingpin killed another person. His friend and him were joy riding and drove in to the kingdom. He was 19 that's it 19. He had a wife and children."Peter told his wife screwing up the newspaper.
"Don't get yourself worked up. I honestly believe that someone will stop him someday." She told him. "I know but Who? Even the X-men won't get involved as the Professor says that it's legal what he is doing and if a mutant was to stop him people would see them as law breaks and bring even more trouble to mutant kind." Peter told her.
"I know that there are very few heroes left but wait and see. Live by the sword dye by the sword. Every evil ruler eventually gets beat. It happened to Hitler and it'll happen to him." She smiled kissing his lips. "Just you wait and see tiger." She winked before walking in to the kitchen to make breakfast.
Peter wished he could get back out there and do something. Each day he did nothing to stop kingpin he felt like a piece of him died inside. Some nights he would pull out his scrap book of newspaper cuttings of photos he had taken of himself as spider-man and would cry himself to sleep. Something that would upset Mary Jane Watson-Parker every time she saw it.
Even if things seem ok between them now. They were having marriage problems. Peter wished he had died on that rooftop and blames his wife for calling S.H.I.E.L.D. A few times he would drink to feel anything and on occasion has hit his wife across the face. She would divorce him but feels guilty about it as ahe is all he has left and thinks that things will get better for them.
chapter 2 coming soon
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